I'm Silvia. I'm from Peru. I like to go out with my friends when I have time, but if I don't have much time to go out with them, I usually listen to pop and rock music.Last summer, I traveled to Utah with my sister to work for summer season. We worked for three months in Westgate Park City Resort. I met a lot of people from other countries but I didn't practice my english because they talked in spanish.
Also, I like swimming all saturday mornings . This activity is really wonderfull because I can relax!
Other fact about me I cook very well. I can make dinners or lunches. My best dish is ''ceviche''. It's very delicious and easy to make. It's the most famous dish in my country.
I like to dance. The traditionals peruvians dances are very difficult but it is interesting and exciting, if you want to learn.
Finally, I study advertising and communications in the university, so I like to design brands and do new advertisements proyects. It's really exciting and creating.
This is an interesting and very detailed post!
ResponderEliminarI have many questions for you, to ask at another time. I love Utah! I hiked in Zion National Park last year.
Some points to edit:
Capitalize all proper nouns.
Check spelling (I see a few errors).
Thanks, Silvia!
Hi, Silvia!
ResponderEliminarYou have a cohesive series of paragraphs, with nice details. Your writing is advanced, so I have a suggestion. Try to include some transition sentences between paragraphs. For example, between the last 2 paragraphs, you could say something like "Along with good food, my country also has music and dancing."
Grade = 98
My good friend!Hello!Read this article about you.I know something interesting about you.And I also like to swim!
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